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She knows what I mean. Who doesn't know that novel?

Yeah...I didn't want to spell it out (lazy).

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"Dunces" By Toole. Ignacious O'Reilly is a funny character. The Eyes of the Dragon by Stephen King. He will like that one I'm sure of it. Watership Down by Adams. It's theme is political but he doesn't have to know that.

It's BS. Yes.

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Tell me the grammar errors Isabell. The punctuation errors I can fix by making the phrasing simple. Please show me the grammar errors Isabell. Thanks a million. Your input is what I am seeking.

Oh and sorry for my delayed reply. I had to step out for a moment. Thanks guys.

Really. That's not good at all. unacceptable. I would have to do it all over again. Rats! Thanks Isabell. I'll try it again. Stay tuned. What about this one? I've been told I do a better job when I write in first person narrative. What do you think Isabell. Talk to me straight as...

It shows the same errors? Hmm...not good. If it shows the same errors then disregard this thread. I do pay attention Polly. __

I do listen. Try me.

My brother told me that he will give me, as an x-mas gift, a $100 B&N gift card. So, I have to wait a few days.

Then I will likely purchase Garner's Modern American Usage.

Which book, from the links you posted, do you find most helpful? Which one is the best?

I never knew about such books. So thank you for the info.

OK, I'll review those links. Thanks.

Well, I have always liked how Hemingway divides quotations. But many writers argue that quotations have a proper position in the paragraph - like I did in the story fragment above. I am just uncertain. Style guide? explain.

I just picked a name. No reason. I just wanted to change things.

That's a good one. :lol:

Some writers write dialog differently than other writers. Therefore I do not know how to properly use them (quotations). Am I using quotations correctly in the following passages? I feel that they are jammed together and need more space. I do not know. __