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I liked this. Really warm and words felt smiling. As did I.

I liked the first too lines the best. It is hard to give feedback when obviously this is written based on a personal experience. I would myself made it maybe little more open. Like for example the lines Because if I had you near me I wouldn’t have this ache I’ll think about you everyday...

My first poem. Found out later that I was influenced by Godspeed You! Black Emperor by the way of not knowing it.

Here is me posting and hoping for some recommendations. I loved this book. Here is some of the reasons that made it happen thus. First I love the silent epic quality of this one. It was so harsh and bleak, which made it believable. Because if I think of the situation that the world was in...