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With Thanks Stewart and Seven - Thanks for the responses and advice. It's been taken on board cut from the beginning. All the best and thanks again.

Tavoli Social Club Chapter 4 Part 2 The broad shoulders and heavyset face trembled as Portman broke into a husky smoker’s chuckle. His cough shared many traits with a lion’s roar, strong enough and weighty enough to force a backward rock from Bruno. Portman’s stubby arm levered his palm as it...

Tavoli Social Club Chapter 4 Four Framed in chiselled rock, the round wooden door, regal in its blackness, stood around four metres in diameter, a large wrought iron knocker protruding nobly from its left hand gateway. The Sign above the door read : THE TAVOLI SOCIAL CLUB. A complex of...

Tavoli Social Club Chapter 3 Three The fields were a luscious deep green, back dropped by rolling hills and sheer mountains. The grass, the envy of any championship golf course, felt soft beneath his feet, too short to poke up between his toes yet spongy enough to leave small impressions on...

Tavoli Social Club Chapter 2 TWO It was only when they stood that he realised he wasn’t wearing any shoes. Jeans, sure. T-shirt, check. Socks and shoes, no. He was in exactly the same clothes that he’d been stood outside the bar in only half an hour or so beforehand. He could still...

Hi I would be really grateful if you could provide feedback on my first few chapters. It's a murder mystery set in heaven... ONE When is dead not dead? Is it when the blood continues to rush and the lungs still blow, when the cold still bites and the noise keeps on at just a decibel too...

Stewart Thank You. I'm glad to be back!

Steffee It's great to get such positive, genuine feedback. You are a credit to this forum. I can't see why any new writer would be concerned or nervous about showcasing their work when they have people like you to support them. Keep it up...

Myron Bolitar I'd have to go with Harlan Coben's series...just pipping the Lincoln Rhyme novels by Jeffery Deaver. Just started Promise me last night after finishing The Cold Moon...

74 - Chapter Two Chapter Two So this is me, John Kane, dope smoker. I don’t come from a broken home or a crumbling, crime centric estate like the government, I am sure, would prefer me too. No, I’m thirty-one years old with a beautiful wife, three amazing children, a ninety seven thousand...

Hi I would welcome any feedback on my first adult crime novel. Thank you very much! *************************************************** Chapter One 4.11pm Friday I sat in the car with the weighty door pushed open to its limit, my legs dangling, the last few draws of a cigarette...

Ad-Lib I must thank my partners for the quality of retort they provide me with!!!

Reply A good friend as it happens.

No I am not the author!!!!

Review It You lot could always ventutre $14 and buy it. You could even give it a full review. I dare you - try an unbiased review!!!!

My Hero Ahhh, the literary elite, but only to join you. I obviously don't eat at your ethical or intellectual table but I will be ever grateful for the few crumbs you have thrown me. You know I'm feeling like a better person already. Oh, and if you consider this website your home, I...

A genius in our midst Stuart, You truly are a genius. Did you ever work in a comic book store in the Simpsons, or do you have your intellectutal pedestal held elsewhere. Can you imagine somebody trying to promote their book...and absoloute disgrace. I feel comfortable that people of...

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