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I do this writing exercise where I randomly choose 3 words out of a dictionary, and write whatever comes to mind for a set limit of time. Later, I go back and try to edit and rewrite some. These aren't even complete stories, just fragments, but I would still really like some feedback to improve...

1. Teach me compassion, so that I will properly despise mercy Teach me love, and I will learn to hate Teach me truth, and I will tell nothing but lies Trust in me, and I will bring you pain Break my heart, And I will want you more than ever before Hold me close , and I’d wish we were...

Quoting WriterJohnB: " Alas, the devil's in the details, as they say. You're very vague about the gun. If it's a revolver, you don't cock the safety - you unlock the safety and then cock the gun (unless it's double action and then you don't cock, just pull the trigger. But you say he...

Will somebody plz post something about it? Even if u don't like the story, write why, or if u do, then just say so. All this wondering about what you people think is driving me up the wall! P.S.- plz reply

Idk if this is really a short story, or a part of a new novel. lol. But it was something I felt had to write. Please be critical and tell me what can be improved about my writing: I would greatly appreciate it! Ok, here goes nothing. Timothy Borden sits in his room, in the...