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Another poem by moi: Haunted

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Wabbit

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And darker we go...

Haunted

Haunted by your beautiful ghost
Your endless ocean eyes
Smile like amber breaking dawn
painfully Tightly, I hold the delirious dream
of you
Raindrops falling
I hold you
close to my chest
Like the body of a dead child
Weeping and wishing
Inhabiting the past
Instead of those bright light might have maybes
Breaking and scraping my fingers on the walls
Until there is nothing but bone and blood
Nothing can change it
To not so
Nothing.


Regards
SillyWabbit
 
I didn't understand the last two lines. But other than that, I found it gripping. Quite harrowing, really. Especially the lines:

'Breaking and scraping my fingers on the walls
Until there is nothing but bone and blood'

I felt the anguish.

I hope you're not in a sad mood, Wabbit? :(

Third Man Girl
 
Tell moi for me that he's pretty damn good! :)

RaVeN

(You should pay attention to him Wabbit. Maybe you'll learn something) :D
 
Hmmm. Actually I think these two lines together:

Inhabiting the past
Instead of those bright light might have maybes

are my favorite lines.

Nice work again, wabbit :)
 
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