Bombs

[Ou Be Low hoo]

This is something I wrote between bubble baths in my jacuzzi and boat-drinks by my jetty:

As they fall...
Do they know at all,
The life and the loss...
Of one and all?

When the weeping starts,
How far can they see?
To the end
And beginning of eternity.

From a time anew,
To see the beginning through...
When will it end?
I know not, my friend.

Queue applause...

 

[Ou Be Low hoo]

Ehhh...anyone think I'm the next Keats?

 

[dele]

Do you want a polite response or an honest one?

 

[mr_michel]

Ehhh...anyone think I'm the next Keats?

why do you ask?
have you been coughing blood lately?

 

[Ou Be Low hoo]

Do you want a polite response or an honest one?

Honesty is the best policy...no need to be too sycophantic - that WILL make me cough blood...