Curse Of A hero

[Waterstonesguy]

This might not be any good but hey any feed back would be cool

Curse Of A Hero

Heroes. what use is a hero? In a world full of evil a hero should shine, but living as a hero is a lonely existence. The people you try to save shun you, spit on you like you were a piece of common street trash. You see heroes are alone in their quest but this is a quest not to save the innocent in the world, their quest is to clear their tainted souls. Heroes are not pure of heart, Heroes were once the demon that stalked the pure. The things that turn the demons into heroes are what make heroes more fearless. Guilt. Remorse. A hero is on his own road looking for redemption and they must travel the road alone. For the reaper puts his temptations in the hero’s way. Lust. Greed. The reaper will take advantage of these and as a hero falls he will rap his boned fingers around their neck, and force a hero to die. But can the soul of a hero really be cleared? Can the evil of a hero’s past really be forgiven? Or are the heroes forced to walk an endless road fighting the losing battles they must face? Because the road will be long a treacherous and many will die, But that is the Curse of a hero​

 

[Flor]

Okay, it's Christmas Eve and I'm feeling very peaceful and generous....

You have the beginnings of some good ideas here about what constitutes heroism. Now, you could expand expand expand upon each and every thought by creating a hero, creating a situation in which he or she exists, and setting up a story. The potential is endless for plot, characterization, using the sketches of your philosophy about the nature of heroism, etc., to bring some life into characters and have them tell the story. In order to do this, you'll probably have to get out there and live your life (I'm guessing that you're very young), enjoy and observe and remember all the details in order to congeal a valid worldview. Let go of control and let your story unfold. Then, when you know what you want to say, slow down, use lots of words, and write what you know in your own way. Good luck to you.