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Dark Passage : Madness has no rhyme, or reason.

manuscriptx

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To point out, that in the universe or from a simple container, the contents can either be allowed to escape, or from what is outside can enter.

Dear God, what have we done? Simple and unfun, a reign of terror nuns, they exists and will kill Planet Earth. It shakes and stills while my eyes shed pearls. Tears and Silver Surfer says, ' to hell me Ted Kennedy ' a senator he referring to as Mattie, along I just laughed and hummed.

A song I once sung, and did a happy dance too Mom, forever we are survivors, without a cause. Once 49ers, SanFrancisco plighters are long overdue.

There is a method to my madness, just figure out the paddles of sadness and swim down stream like artichokes. Heaven is the greatest, gas stations lay wasted while patrons open gunfire over the gun range.

I see this is the end, a universe without bend, and hampering domination, ok I give in. See you later my friend Gator, don't criticize my chips and taters, baked brown like my own skin.
 
You need to work on rereading your entries before you post them (eg: 'a senator he referring to as Mattie' doesn't really work). Otherwise, this ain't half bad.
 
Pronounciation Difficulty

The verses are inherently skewed because not only am I trying to shape the work with my own creative twist that works, but also stay within the boundarires of spelling, pronunciation and the other critiques the software program MS-Word notes on.

Before I didn't care, but I see the change gradually satisfies most of you.
 
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