My first poetry

[Sky Angel]

It's a silly and stupid one
but I try to write well

Why Should I suffer ?
To touch my goal
or to get them all
I try to reach them but I fall
I smile with tears In my eyes
I know I should Think twice
Cause i'm not wise
My heart hurts me badly
and my mind goes sadly
I try To forget and forgive
and much more To give
But Pain lives inside with Dreams I have
I try to pass it over sometimes and start to love
But Where Am I in ?
Is that our world or hell?
when you smile
They wanna kill
your hope or wanna you fall
My lord Show me right from wrong
give Me light Make Me strong

 

[Leonardo Noto]

It's a silly and stupid one
but I try to write well

Why Should I suffer ?
To touch my goal
or to get them all
I try to reach them but I fall
I smile with tears In my eyes
I know I should Think twice
Cause i'm not wise
My heart hurts me badly
and my mind goes sadly
I try To forget and forgive
and much more To give
But Pain lives inside with Dreams I have
I try to pass it over sometimes and start to love
But Where Am I in ?
Is that our world or hell?
when you smile
They wanna kill
your hope or wanna you fall
My lord Show me right from wrong
give Me light Make Me strong

Not bad, my friend. Thanks for sharing it. Here's a little revision, for what it's worth (I'm a prose writer, not a poet, so take it with a rather large grain of salt ).

Why Should I suffer, I ask Myself?
To touch my goals, to reach them all?
I try to grasp, only to fall.
I smile though tears well in my eyes.
My heart hurting so badly,
my mind wandering sadly.
I try to forget and forgive,
But the pains haunt though the night.
I yearn to pass it over, to let it be;
To love again, to love even me!
But Where Am I--the world or Hell,
When smiles breed hate and looks to kill?
My lord Show me right from wrong,
give Me light, Make Me strong.
In Your Grace, I find my meaning;
In You, my goals and being.

Leonardo Noto