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Poem:

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Wabbit

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A short poem. Hope somebody likes it. I cup my hands, whisper something, and then set her flying free....


Watched the promise

Sat with legs crossed
Watched the promise of storm come
The wind sigh
And the shadows run
With the sun like Dandilion
Day grey cloud and setting sun rays
Reminds me of small hands
pressed
On a window and childhood winter days.

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
Well, this somebody likes it! It's good, Wabbit. Really sets a mood. I like all of the internal rhyme and alliteration. You know what?

I cup my hands, whisper something, and then set her flying free....
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That's a good first line for your next poem! ;)

Keep it up, man, and keep posting!
 
SillyWabbit said:
A short poem. Hope somebody likes it. I cup my hands, whisper something, and then set her flying free....
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A butterfly? A message in a bottle? An injured bird that RaVeN shot and you 'mended? :D

SillyWabbit said:
The wind sigh
And the shadows run
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Nice poem, Wabbit. I liked it because . . . well, just because I liked it :)

Especially: The wind sigh and the shadows run

Yes. :)

Third Man Girl
 
I liked it a lot Wabbit!
And after reading this I like it even more! :D


third man girl said:
A butterfly? A message in a bottle? An injured bird that RaVeN shot and you 'mended? :D
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You've got me all wrong TMG. That's when I was freshly hatched and didn't know I could fly. :cool:
 
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comment :)

Raven, can you fly now? Do you poop on peoples heads??? :D

regards
SillyWabbit
 
SillyWabbit said:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comment :)

Raven, can you fly now? Do you poop on peoples heads??? :D

regards
SillyWabbit
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Have you no respect for your own thread? :confused:

To answer your question, yes and it depends on if they make Dan Brown cry :D

RaVeN
 
I have respect for nothing! Do you hear me NOTHING! MMMMWHAHAHA. I can't...stop...spamming...even....my...own...damn...threads!!!!

Well, it's ok to poop on people that made dan brown cry, then :D

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
SillyWabbit said:
A short poem. Hope somebody likes it. I cup my hands, whisper something, and then set her flying free....


I Love it, Wabbit. It is truly beautiful :)
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