Billy Oblivion
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Postscript Diaries 2.
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Irene Wilde
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I am not bullying, because everyone knows I don't bully, but...
if you had a computer at home, this could be a bestseller instead of Post Script.
Not bullying, really, just suggesting.
Irene Wilde
if you had a computer at home, this could be a bestseller instead of Post Script.
Not bullying, really, just suggesting.
Irene Wilde
Billy Oblivion
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Computer at home is being sorted out at the moment (telephone is another matter).
And these aren't finished pieces. They're fragments of a whole which may, one day, be completed. You may notice i@ve already edited this piece following severe criticism.
I chose this fragment because the last one was so miserable and I wanted to choose a happier moment. I know it doesn't seem very happy but it was the start of a process that led to happiness. Although the four months in the Glasshouse weren't exactly a picnic (even if they did teach me to shoot guns and throw hand grenades).
Not snogging, really, just dancing.
And these aren't finished pieces. They're fragments of a whole which may, one day, be completed. You may notice i@ve already edited this piece following severe criticism.
I chose this fragment because the last one was so miserable and I wanted to choose a happier moment. I know it doesn't seem very happy but it was the start of a process that led to happiness. Although the four months in the Glasshouse weren't exactly a picnic (even if they did teach me to shoot guns and throw hand grenades).
Not snogging, really, just dancing.
Irene Wilde
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I was not severe. You are going to damage my reputation as that kindly old woman from Californi-i-ay.
However, I very much approve of the revisions. Now it reads much more like the trial sequence from "Breaker Morant" (I won't divulge how long it took me to remember the name of that film -- geez, I'm old).
Eventually, I'm going to get both you and Friend RaVeN to pen your complete memoirs. And without a bit of bullying, just suggesting.
Dancing...sure it was. I keep telling you I believe you. Honest. Who could possibly mistake that for snogging?
Irene Wilde
However, I very much approve of the revisions. Now it reads much more like the trial sequence from "Breaker Morant" (I won't divulge how long it took me to remember the name of that film -- geez, I'm old).
Eventually, I'm going to get both you and Friend RaVeN to pen your complete memoirs. And without a bit of bullying, just suggesting.
Dancing...sure it was. I keep telling you I believe you. Honest. Who could possibly mistake that for snogging?
Irene Wilde
Billy Oblivion
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Great film Breaker Morant (although quite removed from historical accuracy).
Anyway, just wait until I reach the part about the firing squad.
Anyway, just wait until I reach the part about the firing squad.