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She never helped me, why would she help you

def1

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a little metaphorical poem i wrote a while back

I met a girl she helped me through some things
She wasn’t new to me Im with her usually
She’s been with everyone but everyone leaves her
Cause she never does shit and she’s a deceiver
She’s a nice piece a ….. a fine dime but if I could find time
I’d rewind time to the day before I seeked her
The divine line between happiness and my false quest
All cause this girl left me quite impressed
Everything was going smooth but in came the side effects
Everything went to hell I wanted to find my death
But I find myself constantly asking for her back
Cause I need her to keep me on track
And from keeping my days from turning completely black
I feel without her I would collapse along with my world
But this time is different I want to kill this girl
She’s not helping like usual and she’s making it worse
I’ve been waiting for years nothing but tears just burst
She fucking lied again I want try again but theres no point in it
Like kids voting when they have no voice in it
I want to poison this bitch and hang her forever
But that would make nothing better so I wrote her a **** you letter
Told her to stay the **** away but another day came
And I find myself asking for her back it’ll always be the same

This girl has got me tied
I’ve been with her a million times
She always fucking lies
But its great to have her on your side
Its great to have her on your side

But she’ll never be on your side don’t trust her
And don’t ever say you love her
Don’t get attached cause she’ll **** you over
Over the months she’ll get colder hard as a bolder
You’ll need the heart of a soilder to part from her
And it starts to burn your heart without her around
Your eyes will get so heavy they’ll fall to the ground
That ball in your throat is sticking out of your neck
Your stomachs tied in knots your mind is lost heart not beating in your chest
Your weakened to your death no sleep and no rest your leaving without breath
You’ll run into her atleast once in your life and that aint a might
She’ll be gorgeous so fucking beautiful
and she’ll want you to know
she’ll always be there just call her name
if your in pain but don’t do it you’ll turn insane
she’ll burn your veins turn the blood red without bloodshed
don’t fucking believe in hope enough said
the girl Im talking about is hope leave her the **** dead

this girl has got me tied
I’ve been with her a million times
She always fucking lies
But its great to have her on your side
Its great to have her on your side
But she’ll never be on your side
 
sorry, i didn't see that before... i like it, a lot..

if you want an specific opinion just say it and i come back... :D
 
I'd have to agree it does remind me of song lyrics. I enjoyed reading it, its got a 'feel' to it.
 
I, too, found this to be song-like (modern-countryish?). Kinda made me tap my heel and nod my head...

There's a lot of pain hidden behind some of the lyrics.
 
you're quite serious that is something new to experience... did something hit you over the head?
but he's right, even if i woudl go with a good rock music... :D
 
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