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The Confession of Bobbyburns, part I

novella

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bobbyburns leaned closer to the mirror as he adjusted his silk ascot. The mirror’s silver had decayed and flaked, rendering his reflection as a shadowy ghost in the dim light. He found a toothpick and removed the last of the poppyseeds from between his teeth, legacies from the irresistible kolaches his grandmother had sent by post from Iowa. He thought of stormclouds over the grassland, and the long flat highway that ran past her house, and his father’s Allis Chalmers chugging through the cut corn. Another life.

His wingtips needed a final buffing. Perched on the edge of a tapestry armchair he worked the chamois across the toes, first the right then the left.

Time to work. He took his place at the head of the table, a pencil, a legal pad, and a glass of water aligned next to his keyboard. The orange evening sun glanced off the walnut tabletop, momentarily blinding him. It was a sign.


He opened a new document and typed

“My name is bobbyburns. I have committed a crime. Through no evil intent. I have taken a life. This is my confession.”

Through the open window, he heard someone singing.

Like the beat beat beat of the tom-tom
When the jungle shadows fall
Like the tick tick tock of the stately clock
As it stands against the wall

Like the drip drip drip of the raindrops
When the summer shower is through
So a voice within me keeps repeating
You, you, you you you

Night and day, you are the one . . .


A beautiful voice, like Fred Astaire’s. The curtains whispered as it faded away, down the street.

You you you. That was for him, matching his mind exactly. He did not yet know why he’d done what he’d done, he only knew he’d done it for her.




Lily stood in the street and looked up at the window, wondering whether he would answer the door today. She was afraid to try. A car passed slowly, edging by her, but she did not move. A man in a Red Sox cap rounded the corner with his dog. He was singing to himself and did not look up at her. She might have been invisible. Even the dog did not turn.
 
Nuh-uh. No-oh-oh. The bobber is so very undead. The bobber lives and breathes and is going on to more adventures in another chapter.

Should we make Lily French? Lily DeVeau. In a white wool coat? With long dark hair. She has peanut shells in her pocket and is wearing loafers. She thinks she is selfless and loving, but that is only because she is so narcissistic she can't see the truth.
 
novella said:
Nuh-uh. No-oh-oh. The bobber is so very undead. The bobber lives and breathes and is going on to more adventures in another chapter.

Should we make Lily French? Lily DeVeau. In a white wool coat? With long dark hair. She has peanut shells in her pocket and is wearing loafers. She thinks she is selfless and loving, but that is only because she is so narcissistic she can't see the truth.
I think you are embarassing misure bobbyburns ;)
 
Good of you to worry, but he's very resilient. I've already tested him in extreme conditions in a wind tunnel, flown him with ice on his wings, and also flogged him with dangerously stupid posts on the 1001 thread back in 2004. No sign of metal fatigue at all. He's water resistant to 250 meters, and his carapace can withstand 4 tons of direct pressure. It doesn't hurt to spray a little WD-40 in there occassionally and wipe him down with a clean cloth.
 
novella said:
Nuh-uh. No-oh-oh. The bobber is so very undead. The bobber lives and breathes and is going on to more adventures in another chapter.

Should we make Lily French? Lily DeVeau. In a white wool coat? With long dark hair. She has peanut shells in her pocket and is wearing loafers. She thinks she is selfless and loving, but that is only because she is so narcissistic she can't see the truth.
How about Lily Lafleur? And can you make her best friends with Marie from Blue Spud? Oooh, so many possibilities for bobby.
 
Lily Pauvey! /Pa:vei/

This last para was kind of weak (or you say it lame?), but the story sounds appealing.I honestly did not think the song lyric was good enough but it fitted here, because you made it relative to what would be going to happen, just my opinion.

I have impatient curious to know what would happen to bobbyburns. continue with the story, Please!/?/.
 
novella said:
Good of you to worry, but he's very resilient. I've already tested him in extreme conditions in a wind tunnel, flown him with ice on his wings, and also flogged him with dangerously stupid posts on the 1001 thread back in 2004. No sign of metal fatigue at all. He's water resistant to 250 meters, and his carapace can withstand 4 tons of direct pressure. It doesn't hurt to spray a little WD-40 in there occassionally and wipe him down with a clean cloth.

This sounds like good clean fun.

:D
 
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