Zach strolled down the parkway enjoying the breeze and fresh air. But the wasn't fresh. Zach and is parents Mark and Hellen live in a bio-dome on the planet once called Mars, and now called New Earth.
Just 10 years before Zach was born Mark and Helen lead a rebellion against the harshest dictator in the history of mankind. He enslaved most of the Human race, and made them his army. But all hope was not losed. Mark's parents joined an underground legion and together they lived peacefully underground. But when the dictator found out about this, he was enraged and sent the army to kill. Luckily the army was to weak, and the underground legion prevailed,. But the leader got away and left a time bomb as his gift to us. For the next several years they built a jet rocket and supplies to reach Mars, the closest planet that would not feel the effects of the bomb. They succeeded.
This is just the intro, but tell me what you think. If you like it, I'll add more!
Just 10 years before Zach was born Mark and Helen lead a rebellion against the harshest dictator in the history of mankind. He enslaved most of the Human race, and made them his army. But all hope was not losed. Mark's parents joined an underground legion and together they lived peacefully underground. But when the dictator found out about this, he was enraged and sent the army to kill. Luckily the army was to weak, and the underground legion prevailed,. But the leader got away and left a time bomb as his gift to us. For the next several years they built a jet rocket and supplies to reach Mars, the closest planet that would not feel the effects of the bomb. They succeeded.
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This is just the intro, but tell me what you think. If you like it, I'll add more!
