Motokid
New Member
Since I have angered a few here and there in this forum, I was trying think of a way for people to critique something of mine. Sort of a tit for tat. I thought about writing some short story, or a paragraph, but that would not have captured something that I really put my heart into. So the best thing that I have to offer is my web site.
If anyone thinks I'm doing this for publicity then pm a mod immediately and have this thread deleted. That's not my intention. I'm asking for help in what I've created. I'm asking for feedback on what works and what doesn't. What is awkward or what needs revision. This web page is something I've put lots of thought into, and I may be too emotionally attached to it to see errors and/or spots that need attention. Close friends and family are not giving me critical feedback.
I want critical. I want to know what works for you, and what does not. You guys are web savy. You are distant enough to call it like you see it.
If what I am asking is not breaking the rules of TBF, and if none of you have any complaints about me posting my web page in this part of the forum for the sake of constructive critique, I will post the link. If you think I'm out of bounds here let me know ASAP. I'll be patiently waiting to see what y'all think. It's the best thing I can come up with for giving you something that means a lot to me, and that I have an emotional attachment to.
Should I post the link for your critique or not?
If anyone thinks I'm doing this for publicity then pm a mod immediately and have this thread deleted. That's not my intention. I'm asking for help in what I've created. I'm asking for feedback on what works and what doesn't. What is awkward or what needs revision. This web page is something I've put lots of thought into, and I may be too emotionally attached to it to see errors and/or spots that need attention. Close friends and family are not giving me critical feedback.
I want critical. I want to know what works for you, and what does not. You guys are web savy. You are distant enough to call it like you see it.
If what I am asking is not breaking the rules of TBF, and if none of you have any complaints about me posting my web page in this part of the forum for the sake of constructive critique, I will post the link. If you think I'm out of bounds here let me know ASAP. I'll be patiently waiting to see what y'all think. It's the best thing I can come up with for giving you something that means a lot to me, and that I have an emotional attachment to.
Should I post the link for your critique or not?