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Hey Stewart, Sorry about the delay in posting. I just survived my organic chem, genetics, microbio exams today :) and began Med school preparations :mad: I asked a journalism student about the adverbs and she said that it's not a good idea to use them. But she also stated that the key...

Hi Stewart, Yeah, I definitely see what you mean now. Thanks for looking that deeply into the passage. Well, I guess you can tell that this is the first novel I have written. I wrote screenplays for a few years and then gave up after failing to find anyone with whom to collaborate...

Hi Steward, Thanks for taking the time to check out the first chapter. I'm not realy sure what you mean by "clumsy stuff" and that it "doesn't draw the reader in." But you are the second person to say that (one of my readers said something similar to what you did), so I will definitely...

Hi everyone, I am a new writer and would like to get some constructive feedback. Jeff