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First time here So far it seems like no one really knows much. While appreciate Stewarts comments, I was looking for a input on the story line, obviously there needs to be an editor. Please input on the story only, look past gramatical stuff, that is just small details that can be fixed later.

Thank you very much!!! It is obvious I have much to learn.

Comments to this point Please let me know, and I will share the rest, it gets much better from here!!

continued Angel Could it be an Angel a vision, or a dream, something so amazing not once has he seen. “Hi Charlie” Dominic says as he walks by the Police Chief in the corridors of City Hall. . It was obvious he pretended not hear him. Dominic knew why, he felt bad about what was...

continued In all of his days of viewing porn, watching porn, flipping through the endless pages of magazines, never could he have imagined what $19.95 could buy. Dominic considered himself a “coinsurer” of types when it came to viewing naked women. Growing up in his own secret fantasy world...

continued But there where many that did believe in us, with our City Council meeting filled with input from all corners of the community. Nearly four years ago, with the city's fate still a question mark in many minds, our City embarked on the Downtown Revival Project. This was a show of faith...

continued Mayoral Convention The game of politics will get you uptight A battle between the left and the right Protecting the wealthy is the right wingers creed And tax and spend The leftist need The battle fought In Congressional Hall with their promise To save us all...

continued Chapter 3 Flashback: Be kind to a child No matter what they say the influence you have Go beyond just today It is 1974 and Dominic stands at the corner as the parade passes by. Fascinated at the go- carts, the princesses, everyone has candy for him. The streets are...

continued Chapter 2 Take some time to look at your life, to figure out the cause of strife To laugh and cry, listen and learn we each have our own concern. For joy and pain, like sunshine and rain work together to nurture a gain To love is good because it is so difficult. For...

continued As he arrived to Rods‘, he admired the beauty of the surroundings. Dominic a little jealous as Rod is free of the constraints of family to take advantage of all of the luxuries his estate has to offer. The home on the lake overlooked two bays and was one of the most coveted pieces of...

continued Dominic, is tall dark and handsome, with deep blue eyes and a charisma given to a rare few. He is an impeccable dresser from head to toe. Today he is wearing a tailored suit, a pin striped shirt, with silver monogrammed cufflinks and polished black shoes. He is dressed to kill. He...

Just let me know. I will share chapter by chapter to those wanting more. Your feed back is greatly appreciated and I would be happy to share the entire Novel with you.

The Home Site Written by Dominic Davey Edited by Liz Lover Please provide feedback if you are left wanting to know more? or is it uninteresting? Chapter 0ne: An Angel and a Rose Two names that fit so well One will be in heaven The other was his hell Hey you...