I found (and continued to find) the author's random leaps back and forth through the modern time, the flashbacks, and the brief heaven scenes very irritating. The way she's talking about one thing in a paragraph, only to suddenly change scenes and POVs in the next paragraph without any sort of page break to indicate the switch made it a bit confusing to read. I think I found it more annoying than I normally would have because she didn't always do this, and would occasionally use a page break here or there...yet, couldn't be bothered to keep up with it throughout the novel.
I also found the way the kids to be written (ages 5, 13, and 14 at the start of the book) to be inconsistent. One minute, one of the children would talk their age, and a page later they would say/do something that felt unusual and too grown up for them. But, then again, this book features 13/14 year olds having sex like that's perfectly normal for children their age to be doing (I'm sad to say that this does happen now, but back in the 70s? ).
The police investigation seemed weak/half-assed to me too...
Am I really supposed to believe that while looking into Mr. Harvey, the cops simply assume that he's a swell guy because he's overly cooperative, and they don't find his suggestion of Susie being murdered in an underground room at the cornfield the least bit suspicious? I'm supposed to believe that they never ask around about him doing anything that could seem suspicious when considering what they think they know happened to Suzie, and it's never brought up that he went to the local sinkhole and dumped a locked safe (or whatever it was) into it? You know, something big enough to hold a little girl's body?
No one looks into that?
And then there's the bit near the end, when the book really started disappointing me, when Suzie randomly "falls from Heaven" and possesses Ruth's body.
She seriously ignores the fact that she's pretty much standing right where her body is buried...and instead of using her time wisely to make that known to the police, also informing them that the killer's back in town, she decides that her time is better spent getting banged by the boy she had a crush on when she was alive?
Who cares about catching her killer, and uncovering her body to give her broken family some closure, sex is WAY more important!
I'm sorry, that pretty much killed the book for me right there.
I had forgiven the flaws mentioned above, until that particular bit reared it's ugly head...and everything after that seemed pretty lacking and rushed.
Abigale, the mother who abandons her family for nearly 10 years, is pretty much forgiven by the final few sentences. Mr. Harvey gets his butt handed to him by karma, but we never learn if the family learns of his death...and the closure that would come with that. And everyone sloppily lives happily ever after.