Challenge: Post a Poem...Keep Posting

[Meadow337]

I like the imagery of the "road's dressed up and going nowhere"

 

[Gita V.Reddy]

you guys have written some great poetry.

I especially liked the 'don't pick up the pieces of the jigsaw of pain' - very well put Gita V.Reddy.

Thanks. Truth to tell, I'm a prose person but there are those times when only poetry serves!

 

[Gita V.Reddy]

I like the imagery of the "road's dressed up and going nowhere"

Most of the times, quite gaudily dressed up too!

Thanks.

 

[Meadow337]

Most of the times, quite gaudily dressed up too!

Thanks.

Sigh lol sometimes there just isn't a way to say what you want politely ....

You fill in the blanks LOL

like a cheap .... and sometimes cities are like that too ... all cheap glitz and flashy neon signs promising hidden delights but all corruption underneath.

 

[stigmaticman]

Sharing these few lines...

From the terrace of a high rise
I watched the sun set
Birds fly to their nests
The sky darken with a shimmer of stars.

From the terrace of a high rise
I watched the city below
Caught up in a snarl
The roads dressed up and going nowhere.

beautiful

 

[Gita V.Reddy]

Thank you, stigmaticman.

 

[Gita V.Reddy]

Sharing these few lines...

From the terrace of a high rise
.........
The roads dressed up and going nowhere.

Hi Occlith,

I'm glad you liked my poem, thanks.