def1 said:
well why would the officer stab himself? I think once you read on it gets clear the officer is not the murderer. Secondly I think you're right but I probably wont change things like that until the final draft. No I dont want any help on spelling and grammer, just content. Thank you. If its not too much too ask, if you could elaborate more on what you thought about the story. Im not even sure if you like it. Also its a horror story and we have all creative aspects in it, so we can basicly write about anything.
There is nothing that can show up at that link.
If you can write almost everything, I have something to sell, well, of course if you are interested. I once got a storyline as I read something about quatitum theory. Didn't think I was capable of elaborating it into a horrior story, because of the language and because of my lack of enthusiam on horror novals. It suspended somewhere in my mind. anyway.
Basically, what I thought was this:
Every one of us has many of ''self"s. we could be everyone and we could exist at many places at the same time! The story started from a murder, almost no clue, or clueless. It was a man's dead body. There was nothing could give the police any further information about the murder. So, it was just filed.
a year's later, or several months later, another murder of man happened. You must make up something look like similar in those two cases, and cases that would be going to happen, like the men have a limped leg or something.
May I write later, because I don't know whether you would be interested in that kind of material and also because my head hurts.
goodluck though. oh, by the way, like your confidence on your grammer and spelling.
I hope you mean a short story.
