sanyuja said:I am reading 'Choke' right now and I read one of your earlier posts about Chuck's use of line breaks. I will pay more attention to that!
Hmm, I may have (stupidly) mixed terminology. With Chuck I was moreso talking about his very annoying tendency to break a line
mid-sentence, as if
he were
trying to achieve some
kind of poetic
metre.
But yes, observing not just the story but the way the writer chose to tell it can be interesting.
Or annoying.
Yeah, that could have been done. The impact would have been more had he asked this question to himself (as you say, internally).
I was still pondering _The Namesake_ a few nights ago…I have to believe she had that particular end of the story in mind as she was working up to it, and just fleshing out a mid-story. I still stick by my theory that it would have worked extremely better as a short story (or a ‘novella’, a dying term) and either eliminating the Maxine subplot and/or the wife subplot.
Gogol’s father diees, after all the ceremony stuff is over, the mother decides to go back to India and then Gogol finds the book. The End.
I will try my library next time. I doubt getting my hands on it.
If you can’t track any Gogol down let me know…
See you,
j