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If you're into sad poems...

...you might want to read this.

Comments, suggestions will be entertained. =)

This poem is quite reminiscent of Evanescence’s “My Immortal” but I assure you, I did not do any copying. Plagiarism isn’t my style. =P I heard the song and just realized they were alike on the “second voice” parts of my poem. Here goes:

Alone – Stella

Blazing eyes, filled with unspeakable rage
This woman’s definitely now coming of age.
Her daughter’s eyes, filled with utmost sorrow,
Wishing there was no tomorrow.

”Don’t despair my darling, papa’s here…
Come, I will wash away your fears.”


Screaming to cover up all her faults,
Unable to resist, she no longer fought
The madness inside her, growing steadily,
Her daughter crying, praying she’d be set free.

”Don’t cry my daughter, papa’s here…
Come, I will wipe away your tears.”


And evil crept up her wrinkled hand…
Taking one step closer towards her daughter and
Slapping her repeatedly, shouting “you’re a mistake”
…And that was all her faithful daughter could take.

”Don’t worry my angel, papa’s here…
I will be with you throughout the years.”


And time flew swiftly, unable to heal wounds
She knew she would be dying soon…
Recalling the moment her daughter fled from home,
She painfully regrets she’s now alone.

Interpretations? You already get it when you read it, actually. So there. =)
 
I loved it! It reminds me of a book that I read....hmmmm.... can't remember...
Great poem though! I'm not really a poet or anything so I can't really say anything more in depth than that!
 
h_carnahan said:
I loved it! It reminds me of a book that I read....hmmmm.... can't remember...
Great poem though! I'm not really a poet or anything so I can't really say anything more in depth than that!


Thank you very much!!! :)
 
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