Originally posted by Jren
I hope some of his other books will do better.
Here's a review I read a little while ago of the sequel:
Let me start out by saying that Robert Newcomb's "The Gates of Dawn" is a stunning novel. Literally. After several hours, I blacked out from the migraine accrued while reading the book. The Gates of Dawn is Newcomb's second foray into the epic fantasy world. And I pray to God, it's his very last.
Here are the four reasons why the novel is drivel, and I'm sure you could come up with several dozen more without breaking a sweat:
1) The writing is absolutely horrific.
I have never, ever witnessed a book with such awkward, ponderous, and downright BAD, prose. Newcomb doesn't have even the slightest modicum of writing ability. “Gates of Dawn” is choked full of grammatical errors, cheesy, horrfic dialogue, repetitive phrasing, adverb tags, etc. Put it this way: anything that can be done wrong, grammatically, Newcomb has done it.
Whoever edited "Gates of Dawn"should be fired on the spot; it exhibits all the qualities of a first daft. The writing is so bad that an elementary school dropout could find the errors. Was it even edited at all?
For example:
In a dialogue scene between evil villains, Newcomb actually has one of the villain call someone “sophomoric”. It’s a word, but completely out of place. Geez, talk about an egregious breach in continuality…
2) Most of the book is pure exposition.
Newcomb treats his readers like idiots, bashing them over the head with not-so-subtle plot pointers. He also pumps the entire plot through the overactive mouths of Tristan’s two wizard friends; indeed, practically every third page is yet-another-explanation, ad nauseam. If after five pages you tire of the two wizards equivocating with Tristan, brace yourself; you have only another 300 pages of it. Any reader expecting the protagonist to actually do something—other than stand around chatting with the wizards—will be sorely disappointed.
3) The Plot is tenuous and contrived.
Tristan’s friends spend most of their time hiding secrets from him. These “secrets” get doled out in very large chucks (pages and pages) during the course of the novel. The plot goes something like this:
Tristan doesn’t know what to do. He talks to wizards. They pretence ignorance. Tristan moans for fifty pages. Wizards then reveal a secret that will help Tristan. Ad infinitum.
To add insult to injury, I can't say how frustrated I felt after spending a good 10 hours finishing the book(i've run marathons that are easier), only to find out that the ever single action by the protagonist (and friends) had zero impact on the ultimate plot ending. Indeed, Tristan and Co. could have gone to Disneyland and the outcome would have been the same. I don't recall ever reading a book with this type of scenario.
4) Dismal female characterization.
In his first book, "The Fifth Sorceress", every female character was either a
a) sexual deviant
b) victim of rape
c) helpless hanger-on, useful for soft porn scenes
d) combination of two or more
Did he improve his female characters in "The Gates of Dawn"?
No.
The two leading female characters are insipid. Tristan's sister mopes around, crying whenever Tristan leaves. His "love interest" spends several hundred years getting raped by an evil wizard.
I think we all know what Newcomb’s personal opinions of women are. I'll stop there.
Summery:
I equate Newcomb’s newest offering the same entertainment value found in mowing the lawn. Spare yourself the headache.
PS- Just finished the fith book in the 'Crown of stars' by Kate Elliot.
one word to describe it:excellent.
Can't wait for number six to be released.
Just finished the fourth one and Elliot is quickly rising throught my favourite authors list. Great stuff