readingomnivore
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Reina M. Williams’s MISS BENNET BLOOMS was an inexpensive Kindle novella published in 2014. It is the story of Mary Bennet, middle daughter and the last unmarried. Trying to distinguish herself from her prettier, more popular sisters, she’d shut down most of her emotions. It’s only from spending time in the peace of Lizzy and Jane’s homes that she comes to see how restricted she’s been. Charles Bingley’s cousin Nathaniel Bingley has returned from the West Indies where he’d studied plant life, and Mary had been touched by the letters about Nathaniel’s research that Charles had shared with his family. Mary and Nathaniel are swiftly attracted to each other, but Nathaniel is afraid that a wife would detract from his scientific career; he doesn’t have financial resources to publish his book or to support a family. Georgiana Darcy’s fiance Sir Camden promises to see to the publication of the West Indies book, to be dedicated to someone he lost who’d loved the Indies, and commissions Nathaniel to do a comparable study of Pemberley, to be dedicated to Georgiana who will by then be his wife. Darcy offers a cottage at Pemberley for Nathaniel’s use while writing both books. Nathaniel Bingley proposes, Mary accepts, and they lived happily ever after.
Williams stays faithful to Austen’s characters, adding depth to Mary Bennet as she finds the courage to change. Nathaniel Bingley is a new character, one who’s suffered loss and fears being hurt again: “Nathaniel had a dear cousin [Charles Bingley], more like a brother, who now shared his family and friends with Nathaniel. He had his work, his health. He had fond memories of his parents. He had purpose. He had a good life. He did not want it disrupted. And he believed Miss Bennet probably shared this feeling.”
From the original Pride and Prejudice characters, Lizzy and Darcy now have a month-old son Edward Fitzeilliam Darcy, whose christening is the occasion for a family gathering. Charles and Jane Bingley have a son Charles Bingley. Mrs. Bennet’s main concern are her nerves, her desire for Lydia and Wickham to be summoned to Pemberley, and her wanting Mary married; Mr. Bennet is impressed with Nathaniel Bingley’s research and pleased to welcome him to the family. Kitty Bennet is married to Colonel James Fitzwilliam, very happily. Anne de Bourgh is married to Alfred Fitzeilliam, James’s brother, over Lady Catherine’s objections.
My major complaint about MISS BENNET BLOOMS is the overtly religious sentiments expressed by Mary and Nathaniel. While not inappropriate, the avowal are a bit over the top. Still, as Pride and Prejudice fan fiction goes, MISS BENNET BLOOMS isn’t bad. (B)
Williams stays faithful to Austen’s characters, adding depth to Mary Bennet as she finds the courage to change. Nathaniel Bingley is a new character, one who’s suffered loss and fears being hurt again: “Nathaniel had a dear cousin [Charles Bingley], more like a brother, who now shared his family and friends with Nathaniel. He had his work, his health. He had fond memories of his parents. He had purpose. He had a good life. He did not want it disrupted. And he believed Miss Bennet probably shared this feeling.”
From the original Pride and Prejudice characters, Lizzy and Darcy now have a month-old son Edward Fitzeilliam Darcy, whose christening is the occasion for a family gathering. Charles and Jane Bingley have a son Charles Bingley. Mrs. Bennet’s main concern are her nerves, her desire for Lydia and Wickham to be summoned to Pemberley, and her wanting Mary married; Mr. Bennet is impressed with Nathaniel Bingley’s research and pleased to welcome him to the family. Kitty Bennet is married to Colonel James Fitzwilliam, very happily. Anne de Bourgh is married to Alfred Fitzeilliam, James’s brother, over Lady Catherine’s objections.
My major complaint about MISS BENNET BLOOMS is the overtly religious sentiments expressed by Mary and Nathaniel. While not inappropriate, the avowal are a bit over the top. Still, as Pride and Prejudice fan fiction goes, MISS BENNET BLOOMS isn’t bad. (B)