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A FATAL TWIST OF LEMON is the first in Patrice Greenwood’s Wisteria Tearoom mystery series set in Santa Fe, New Mexico. A free or inexpensive Kindle download published in 2012, it features Ellen Rosings, owner of the tearoom and first person narrator, and Detective Antonio Aragon of the SFPD.
Ellen Rosings gives a thank-you tea party for the people who’ve helped her get Wisteria Tearoom ready to open, only to have the president of the Santa Fe Preservation Trust Sylvia Carruthers murdered in the private dining parlor at the end of the afternoon. She’’d been strangled with her own necklace. Who wanted her dead, and why choose such a public setting for murder? “The horror of it made me close my eyes, and I felt a familiar spiral of despair pulling me downward... I could not, dared not let this defeat me. I had to fight it. It would be all too easy to give in to depression after something like this, but I knew that if I did, I would lose the tearoom that I’d worked so hard to create, and in which I had invested everything I had, financially and emotionally. So I’d fight for it. All I could think of was to try to figure out who had killed Sylvia. The police would do their job, but they had no personal stake in identifying her killer. I did.” (39)
I’m ambivalent about A FATAL TWIST OF LEMON. The plot is basic at best, and once the motive is disclosed, who killed Sylvia becomes obvious. It’s doubtful that a policeman (not on the case) would confide so much to a woman casually wandering around in the police department offices.
Characters, especially Ellen and Tony Aragon, carry believable baggage that will make the hinted-at eventual relationship difficult. The romance between female amateur detective and investigating cop is a cliche of too many cozy mysteries. Ellen’s Miss Manners personality seems bland and, despite her financial acumen, she pulls a major TSTL when she goes to call on the suspected murderer just after realizing the identity. At least she does have the smarts to call Aragon and tell him who and why she suspects, so he’s able to rescue her at the last moment. Fewer secondary characters with better development would improve the series to come.
Setting is emphasized through bits of Santa Fe history: “...I crossed the plaza to La Fonda, the historic hotel on the plaza’s southeast corner. La Fonda’s been a magnet for celebrities and Santa Fe socialites not just for decades but for centuries. It’s where the President stays when he’s in town. Everybody who’s anybody goes there, as well as a lot of us who aren’t anybody in particular.... La Fonda is a fabulous, jumbled pile of brown stucco, renovated in the early twentieth century by architect John Law Meem, one of the creators of Pueblo Revival style. Meem’s hallmarks are seen throughout the building in the heavy, carved beams and zapatas, Mexican tile ornamentation and punched tin light fixtures, and many other details that made La Fonda one of the defining pieces of what is known as Santa Fe Style. (89-90)
The reason I’m ambivalent about A FATAL TWIST OF LEMON--the title comes from the necklace with which Sylvia was strangled having lemon agate beads, as well as the association with tea--is a sense of distance from the characters and events of the story. The characters are interesting enough that I’ll read the next book in the series to see if Greenwood’s overcome this problem. (C+)
Ellen Rosings gives a thank-you tea party for the people who’ve helped her get Wisteria Tearoom ready to open, only to have the president of the Santa Fe Preservation Trust Sylvia Carruthers murdered in the private dining parlor at the end of the afternoon. She’’d been strangled with her own necklace. Who wanted her dead, and why choose such a public setting for murder? “The horror of it made me close my eyes, and I felt a familiar spiral of despair pulling me downward... I could not, dared not let this defeat me. I had to fight it. It would be all too easy to give in to depression after something like this, but I knew that if I did, I would lose the tearoom that I’d worked so hard to create, and in which I had invested everything I had, financially and emotionally. So I’d fight for it. All I could think of was to try to figure out who had killed Sylvia. The police would do their job, but they had no personal stake in identifying her killer. I did.” (39)
I’m ambivalent about A FATAL TWIST OF LEMON. The plot is basic at best, and once the motive is disclosed, who killed Sylvia becomes obvious. It’s doubtful that a policeman (not on the case) would confide so much to a woman casually wandering around in the police department offices.
Characters, especially Ellen and Tony Aragon, carry believable baggage that will make the hinted-at eventual relationship difficult. The romance between female amateur detective and investigating cop is a cliche of too many cozy mysteries. Ellen’s Miss Manners personality seems bland and, despite her financial acumen, she pulls a major TSTL when she goes to call on the suspected murderer just after realizing the identity. At least she does have the smarts to call Aragon and tell him who and why she suspects, so he’s able to rescue her at the last moment. Fewer secondary characters with better development would improve the series to come.
Setting is emphasized through bits of Santa Fe history: “...I crossed the plaza to La Fonda, the historic hotel on the plaza’s southeast corner. La Fonda’s been a magnet for celebrities and Santa Fe socialites not just for decades but for centuries. It’s where the President stays when he’s in town. Everybody who’s anybody goes there, as well as a lot of us who aren’t anybody in particular.... La Fonda is a fabulous, jumbled pile of brown stucco, renovated in the early twentieth century by architect John Law Meem, one of the creators of Pueblo Revival style. Meem’s hallmarks are seen throughout the building in the heavy, carved beams and zapatas, Mexican tile ornamentation and punched tin light fixtures, and many other details that made La Fonda one of the defining pieces of what is known as Santa Fe Style. (89-90)
The reason I’m ambivalent about A FATAL TWIST OF LEMON--the title comes from the necklace with which Sylvia was strangled having lemon agate beads, as well as the association with tea--is a sense of distance from the characters and events of the story. The characters are interesting enough that I’ll read the next book in the series to see if Greenwood’s overcome this problem. (C+)