Kelisidina
New Member
Summary:
Tim was in a car accident with his wife, the clash killing 7 people in the process. Tim blames it on himself, since he was texting at the time and was not able to pay attention to the road. He then decides to help 7 people, to atone for that accident.
My Critique:
Well done, the emotions were there, but really: Why does he have that WTF face every 5 minutes? It's quite depressing though, and it left a bitter after taste. Though if you like drama, this is perfect for you.
Tim was in a car accident with his wife, the clash killing 7 people in the process. Tim blames it on himself, since he was texting at the time and was not able to pay attention to the road. He then decides to help 7 people, to atone for that accident.
My Critique:
Well done, the emotions were there, but really: Why does he have that WTF face every 5 minutes? It's quite depressing though, and it left a bitter after taste. Though if you like drama, this is perfect for you.