A response to all
Firstly, its a completed story and spellchecked to the best of my ability.
Secondly (and hopefully for the last time) I, me, David Frame, did not come on this site and push my book down anybodys throat.
The script is for sale for anybody who wishes to spend a few dollars downloading a book from a previously unpublished, first time author - a book you can read for about £1.50 after having a look at the first three imperfect chapters - not bad considering the work I have put in. But if people don't want to buy it then they wont - it really is that simple.
The reason that I, me, David Frame has not bothered promoting it is that I am still working on it to a degree- occasional additions of character description that add to but do not change the plot. The two reviews on lulu came from firstly a friend and secondly a friend of a friend - I gave them my log-in so they could read the latest version at no cost to them. I have no control over what they put in as comments.
Guys, I know I'm not in the clique but how many apologies do you want me to make for somebody putting three (now long removed) inserts onto a book site and two people putting their opinions on MY page of lulu.
Do you want me to grovel...sacrifice a part of my salary to show my sorrow and regret. Look, I apologise again but what do you want - blood???? If anything its been a talking point for 2-days if nothing else. Can't we get a little perspective on this or will you still be hounding me about this 10 days from now - a guy who hasn't actually contributed to the problem at all.
Don't any of you have friends that have done things that make you cringe thinking it was in your best interest. Do you manage to control all of the actions of your pals???
If I, me, David Frame wished to promote my book, I would gladly promote it via me, proudly in my name and in the proper channels!!!!! I havent spent a year writing it to try ans sneakily influence a handful of people on one website!!! When I am happy with it, I'll promote it fully. If somebody spends £1.50 and takes a risk, then its up to them - I am not forcing them to!!!