Looks like that wasn't successful (rubbing it in msx's face, that is), but I wouldn't work too hard to impress someone that low on the food chain. It's not even that he's not a known writer--I'm not either, after all--it's just that he seems to think he's so special in comparison to everyone else...and the only special thing is that he's freaking people out.
A sincere congrats on your achievement, though. I'm sure if he wanted an example of what not to do, he would be using manuscript's stuff, which I actually mentioned to said bad writer before I read through this thread again. LOL. If what I've read of your story is anything to judge by, it's definitely meant to be an example of how you are supposed to write.
As for my location...I imagine many people don't know where I live, because I cite La La Land as my location. And it's true that while my physical body is usually in midwestern USA, my mind is usually frolicking in the deep, lush forests of La La Land.