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a little metaphorical poem i wrote a while back I met a girl she helped me through some things She wasn’t new to me Im with her usually She’s been with everyone but everyone leaves her Cause she never does shit and she’s a deceiver She’s a nice piece a ….. a fine dime but if I could find...

ok I revised it, made some changes to make it flow better. Added more structured paragraghs etc. Its still not complete but its getting there. http://visualconception.bravehost.com/story.html

so basicly my novel isnt worth reading, well alright I guess. I was just hoping for advice.

here is last part that I started on, I personally think its the best part as well... February 15th, 1991 9:30 a.m. Val is still with me in my house. She seems to recall nothing of the event that, I thought, happened last night. I turned on the television and saw that there was another...

thanks also about grammar the reason I didnt care for remarks about that is because that isnt a matter to me at the moment. Im more interested in content. I understand what you're saying about the flow, right now it is basicly a brainstorm considering Im making it up as I go. When it is finished...

Thanks everyone I aprreciate it, and sirmyk can you give me opening paragraph considering i dont want to spend money and be dissapointed thanks

what is you're book lol

its too long it would tke up like 5 posts

thanks guys, I will check on them tommorow, my favorite genres are horror, tripped out novels like "fear and loathing in las vegas" "pulp fiction". hope that helps you all with naming books

ok if you read through the whole post you would know the answers to both, ione its not done, two I can't seem to upload the text to my site without getting wacky symbols

well why would the officer stab himself? I think once you read on it gets clear the officer is not the murderer. Secondly I think you're right but I probably wont change things like that until the final draft. No I dont want any help on spelling and grammer, just content. Thank you. If its not...

can someone reccomened me you're top 5 books

well the jpg. works i know for sure, so can people just review it now please

http://www.i-podshack.com/story.html look, do you see all the symbols

I'll show you right now, does the pic show up tho?

Its kind of long, in the beggining its supposed to say >>All events taken from the journal of William ******, You judge the authenticity of his writing<< thats why I had it on dif. link, does anyone know of a way to copy and paste with out getting those symbols?? anywhere heres the story...

I have to write a novel for english. Its not done but I wanted to get critiques before I keep going. Grammer isnt a problem as of now so please disregard that. Im looking for pure content. Its as a jpg. because when I try to copy and paste it to my website it shows all these weird symbols. Can...