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Collaborative stories: Discussion thread.

That she could not remember the pact, I was not expecting that and nothing so far had led me to believe it was comming. Sorry, did not explaine myself clearly :)

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
Martin you cunning dog :D
uptil now everyone has been very hesitant in plunging into the story. they are just offering subtle innuendos (not that i blame them! i would have done the same)
but you have made it mandatory for the next guy to offer a clear flashback. smart, very cunning.
"I'll tell you then"..... how can Mile-O get past that? :D
unless he does something like "no!" shouted Amber and she fainted *lol*
pssst.. you have made things easier for me!! thanks ;)
 
That she could not remember the pact, I was not expecting that and nothing so far had led me to believe it was comming. Sorry, did not explaine myself clearly
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Oh yes, that! :D

And Piedro, there was nothing cunning about it, it was all I could think of. I still think it was a rather weak attempt, and I will try to do better next time!

Cheers, Martin :cool:
 
Next part is up :) Hopefully its not too bad, and i finally got them out of that damnable apartment and into the cool night air :D

Mile-O, what the hell did you do with her father by the way!! He seems to have been wiped out of the story! :)

Phil
 
phil_t said:
Mile-O, what the hell did you do with her father by the way!! He seems to have been wiped out of the story! :)
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He's about! :rolleyes: I totally forgot she was with him. Maybe they had a cabin together. :cool:
 
One word for both Mile and Phil:

Respect

I'm very impressed, guys, both of you did a great job!!

Cheers, martin :cool:
 
Martin said:
One word for both Mile and Phil:

Respect

I'm very impressed, guys, both of you did a great job!!
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Martin has a hard time with his math but he's right. You guys aren't making this easy for the future line-up.

RaVeN
 
whoa! absolutely brilliant! and scary for me if i may add.there is no chance that i will continue this trend of brilliance

In the next collaborative story, i wanna be before Phil and Mile-O :(
my thoughts are a bit fuzzy now. i think i'll take a simple way out and introduce a murder ;)

EDIT :- hobbiten wrote "He was tall, she had forgotten how tall he was" Carlos wrote "how could he have found her after so long"

so how the hell does she now forget who this person is?
 
hobbiten wrote "He was tall, she had forgotten how tall he was" Carlos wrote "how could he have found her after so long"

so how the hell does she now forget who this person is?
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It's a collaborative story; stuff like that is bound to happen. No sense in going back and editing it, so we'll just have to accept it.

Cheers, Martin :cool:
 
piedro said:
whoa! absolutely brilliant! and scary for me if i may add.there is no chance that i will continue this trend of brilliance

In the next collaborative story, i wanna be before Phil and Mile-O :(
my thoughts are a bit fuzzy now. i think i'll take a simple way out and introduce a murder ;)
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The next story, WOW I am still trying to hang in on this one, the quality is so high.

piedro said:
EDIT :- hobbiten wrote "He was tall, she had forgotten how tall he was" Carlos wrote "how could he have found her after so long"

so how the hell does she now forget who this person is?
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I think it works, a quote from the story

Amber, her memories now unleashed, looked at her visitor. It wasn’t any of them, after all, this guy before her.
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This implies that she was initially mistaken as to the identity of the man . A nice twist and possibly introducing a sub-plot.

I am guessing this story will be a short story, I can't see it filling a 500 page novel, also as this is the first collaborative story, a short story is less daunting. What do you all reckon?
 
Nice job piedro!
I'll see if I can't screw it up when I get home from work tonight. Look for something around 12 hours from now.

RaVeN
 
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