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Collaborative stories: Discussion thread.

ok guys, i am still quivering :eek:
whatever i say is nothing but the truth
i started by making a notepad and trying to analyse all points and organising all facts. i ended up by confusing myself completely

then i said "what the hell" and just started writing without having any idea what i was going to write. but it all just flowed out and i just continued with it. forgive me if i have missed some links or contradicted some points raised before but i just didnt think while writing

it was a beautiful experience
 
Best bit so far, hands down! Absolutely!

I very much liked how you got the father back in there, and I utterly loved how you made her remember his name, with the song and all; great find!!

Good call on the name of the deceased person too, refering back to the 'Kidd' character Mile introduced!

Fantastic!!

Cheers, Martin :cool:
 
You did good piedro! The story has moved on very well :)

...The plot thinkens!

AND... Go Raven! :D

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
Good job Piedro, i liked it!! :)

Go Raven <shakes Pom-Poms in a provocative manner (oh yes, it can be done :D)>

Phil
 
Phil, are you shaking your pom-poms in a provocative manner, AGAIN??? For shame, you floozy! :D

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
Good job Piedro! This story keeps getting better and better. And for some reason, I don't want my turn to come around again...is that bad? :eek:
 
Well, like it or not, you're stuck with it now. :D

I wanted a little twist so went for something different at the end for the next writer to play with. I think/hope/(dare I say) pray I left plenty of open avenues.

RaVeN
PS. Phil, Mile-O called and wants his pom-poms returned forthwith.
 
Just read :)

You pumped up tha action and gave a good twist! The next writer can decide if she is REALLY an Angel or she is just being metaphorical :) I liked it! good stuff!

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
I really liked the twist :) Helped explain the somewhat mangling of the early story too!!

Ruzi is on the plate, Salvaged is in the Batter Box

Phil
 
You can either blame or give credit to Ashlea. She's the one that called her angel and gave me the idea.


RaVeN
 
Ruddy brilliant raven!

for some reason, Amber thrusting a cigarette into Jake's eyesocket made me laugh :D
It made Jake look like a complete idiot, acting so smart all the way and then ending up brushing cigarrete ash out of his eyes :D

i am a lil confused about the Father stuff you wrote, but i guess i am not supposed to ask,or can i?
 
Thanks one & all.

Piedro, I tried to leave the Father kind of confusing, as well as the Angel part. I thought , depending on how it was interpreted, the two might go together and that would give the next writer(s) an option on the way the story could go.

I'm very disappointed in myself for not being more descriptive & for the brevety of my part but I honestly didn't know how much room I had to play with. I should have looked through the FAQ to see. Does anyone know the limit off the top of their head?

RaVeN
 
hate to see the most happening thread go slack
shall we pm Ruzi ? but she hasnt been online since 1st may and if she is busy (busy Ruzi lol that rhymes) we can shift her name after salvaged ???
 
That's a good idea Piedro, that is why I have already done so lol I sent her a PM. As you say, she has not been around. I think we give it a few more days and if she is not around we can move her name to the end of this list :)

Regards
SillyWabbit
 
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