readingomnivore
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MURDER IN COTTAGE #6 is the first in Diane Harmon’s cozy mystery series featuring Liz Lucas. It was published in 2015.
Liz Lucas operates the Red Cedar Spa, in Red Cedar, California, about an hour north of San Francisco. She’s been widowed for almost a year and thinks she may be interested in developing a new relationship. When her manager Bertha finds the body of the Mayor’s wife in Cabin #6, Liz reluctantly calls on the chief of police to come to the Spa.
I’m giving up at less than 10%. Exposition is clumsy. Foreshadowing is of the “had I but known” variety. Writing style is simple, declarative sentences. When Bertha reports the body, she and Liz converse about the dead woman’s background and problems before calling the police chief. Liz doesn’t want to involve him, whom she says is a stupid, lecherous, fat man, but he can help control negative publicity, so she’s willing to use him. She doesn’t call 911, and she doesn’t indicate that a murder’s involved. There’s little sense of place.
No way do I want to continue. No grade because not finished.
Liz Lucas operates the Red Cedar Spa, in Red Cedar, California, about an hour north of San Francisco. She’s been widowed for almost a year and thinks she may be interested in developing a new relationship. When her manager Bertha finds the body of the Mayor’s wife in Cabin #6, Liz reluctantly calls on the chief of police to come to the Spa.
I’m giving up at less than 10%. Exposition is clumsy. Foreshadowing is of the “had I but known” variety. Writing style is simple, declarative sentences. When Bertha reports the body, she and Liz converse about the dead woman’s background and problems before calling the police chief. Liz doesn’t want to involve him, whom she says is a stupid, lecherous, fat man, but he can help control negative publicity, so she’s willing to use him. She doesn’t call 911, and she doesn’t indicate that a murder’s involved. There’s little sense of place.
No way do I want to continue. No grade because not finished.