readingomnivore
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WHEN JANE GOT ANGRY is the latest to date in Victoria Kincaid's novella variants on Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice. It was published in digital format in 2018.
When Caroline Bingley finally returns her call in London, Jane Bennet realizes that Elizabeth had been right in her appraisal of that woman's character--Miss Bingley has not ever been her friend. Jane doubts that Charles Bingley even knows that she is in London, so she and the Gardiners' maid Maggie, who happens to be walking out with Bingley's valet Harvey, formulate a plan whereby Bingley "accidentally" meets Jane on the street. Not strictly proper, but Jane is irritated. Bingley is delighted, affections unchanged, despite his anger at both Caroline and Darcy for interference. There's another hiatus in the resumed relationship, perhaps engineered by Caroline, but Bingley evades her scheming.
The title is misleading, because Jane and Bingley's justifiable anger is little shown. Kincaid develops both's reluctance even to feel angry and their ambivalence about expressing it to the smallest degree. Action is summarized, not shown. Both major characters are so repressed that their anger is unbelievable.
The plot through Bingley's proposal and Jane's acceptance is reasonable, but the final chapter, in which they (accompanied by Mrs. Gardiner, for propriety's sake) hie themselves to Kent to prevent the disastrous proposal-refusal at Hunsford, is not. The epilogue includes Maggie and Harvey in the happily-ever-after.
WHEN JANE GOT ANGRY has an intriguing premise--what would happen if Jane confronted and acted on her feelings--that is sadly undeveloped. (C)
When Caroline Bingley finally returns her call in London, Jane Bennet realizes that Elizabeth had been right in her appraisal of that woman's character--Miss Bingley has not ever been her friend. Jane doubts that Charles Bingley even knows that she is in London, so she and the Gardiners' maid Maggie, who happens to be walking out with Bingley's valet Harvey, formulate a plan whereby Bingley "accidentally" meets Jane on the street. Not strictly proper, but Jane is irritated. Bingley is delighted, affections unchanged, despite his anger at both Caroline and Darcy for interference. There's another hiatus in the resumed relationship, perhaps engineered by Caroline, but Bingley evades her scheming.
The title is misleading, because Jane and Bingley's justifiable anger is little shown. Kincaid develops both's reluctance even to feel angry and their ambivalence about expressing it to the smallest degree. Action is summarized, not shown. Both major characters are so repressed that their anger is unbelievable.
The plot through Bingley's proposal and Jane's acceptance is reasonable, but the final chapter, in which they (accompanied by Mrs. Gardiner, for propriety's sake) hie themselves to Kent to prevent the disastrous proposal-refusal at Hunsford, is not. The epilogue includes Maggie and Harvey in the happily-ever-after.
WHEN JANE GOT ANGRY has an intriguing premise--what would happen if Jane confronted and acted on her feelings--that is sadly undeveloped. (C)