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The Earth Shall Topple Upon It's Axis

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...what the hell is a tasumi? I guess you're talking about the tsunami. Are you really so undereducated that you can't spell above a first grade level? It would explain your dependence on the School of Hard Knocks. Obviously it's just an excuse you use to explain your ignorance and try not to learn anymore. And a college degree will serve me a lot better than being able to say I've been around for a while.

I find it very strange that a Christian would call all people but Americans worthless. Most of those people in Latin America, Europe, and parts of Africa are Christians. Even if they aren't, the Christian thing to do is to help them. I have several friends who aren't Christian, but since I don't believe God plays favorites (it says in the Bible that he treats all people the same and that those who stood in back of the food line in life will stand at the front in heaven), I treat them just as well as my Christian friends. This us versus them mentality you have is exactly what I hate about America. Believe it or not, the rest of the world is getting ahead of us in several fields. We have nothing to be insanely proud over when schoolchildren in Japan, England, and other countries are a thousand more times educated than American schoolchildren.

The government only helps areas that it benefits them to help--private organizations do all the rest. I don't see the government spending billions on wiping out slavery in Sudan, but they're sure as hell spending billions blowing things up in Iraq because it's convenient. One of the jobs of the more fortunate should always be to help the less fortunate. It says that in your Bible. America isn't doing nearly as much as you think. I know, because I'm involved in some organizations that do work to end world hunger and poverty. That's a more important cause than running around and screaming, "The Earth shall topple upon its axis! Pay attention to me or be damned!" while waving your arms like a savage maniac.

Just for your information, I don't need any help keeping my faith going. I attend church on a regular basis and I am a good Lutheran. You, on the other hand, might need some help if you're ignoring the more important passages in the Bible--the "do unto others" and "the meek shall inherit the earth" and all that jazz. I don't have a 666 anywhere written on my body, and I don't look for it on others. How about you worry about your faith and I'll worry about mine, m'kay?
 
I do I do.... It's on my hand. I put it there with a pen. And yet, I'm not the devil, but Val can still rule my library, as long as I get the vampire novels. :D
I don't like the word "get"...I like "share" a lot better. It'd work more easily than us fighting over them all the time. I'm the ruler of the library, but I will be generous with my books--to you, at least, since it is only by your generosity I'm ruling a library in the first place.

And please ignore me if I hog the Shakespeare. You know I can't help myself.
 
The Entire Fleet of the Jefferson is at Great Risk!

Testament 218
The Entire Fleet of the Jefferson is at Great Risk!​

On September 01, 2002 the Word of the Lord came and said;

218.01 These are they which shall befall these United States;
218.02 Upon The Morning of Vast Destruction. I have witnessed a generation of plague and animosity towards my demand.
218.03 The function herein lies with the Trend of Immoral Occupation
Which many unresolved to decline and detach their every vice.

218.04 I have long wearied the gap in which the voluntary demise of these people shall here wise meet with destructive force.

218.05 Herewith are my immediate warnings of perdition upon those who weary me still.

218.06 Stilled are they whose voices are not stronger opposing the Stranger of whom is a Maligned Force of the weaker.

218.07 It is thus Written; That those of whom clandestine the erosion of this error by night shall esteem the latter, by which Forces unvisited shall en-ruin be ignited by dark.

218.08 The deafening disregard for the former who are weakened by the initial cries unto Me shall stand as they are consumed by the deposition of them who witness in my Name.

218.09 Forth, the Spirit of My Fire shall engulf them and immediate calamity is at hand1 .

218.10 The River of Wine2 , which is beset against the Armament of War is increased upon the waters. (I hesitate to write this). (See 190.05).
The Gulf
218.11 The Gulf of this Peninsula is in armament as they speak.
The Valley of Decision
218.12 The Structure of Land upon the Pacific Waters is a Risk to infuse the Valley of Decision towards war. (See 190.03)

Parable of
Internal Appeasement​

218.13 The Hour of Internal Appeasement are the vessels at sea.
218.14 And those that hide the exterior waters ensue a deafening DEFEAT. In which the waters shall induce the Governments to take action.

218.15 Long are the Nights of weary delusion upon those who command these Alien forces. They too, are at risk.
218.16 The sacrifice of these young men shall prevail the onset of another War3 .
BEWARE
ULTRA MEGA VESSELS
218.17 Presiding now over your Borders are the Ultra Mega Vessels of which are in disembodied waters approaching to the south side of the Equator.

Parable of The Russian Sea​

218.18 Man the evil forces of which are south fielding the boundaries of the Russian Sea.
218.19 The onslaught of Demolition will not further to suppress the Rotunda of Emissaries4 That shall arise the morning of the (9/) 17th5 ;
218.20 For which shall they not retreat nor herewith weary and restrict thy foreign policy of Presidential Behavior. (Now dormant and in exile6 ).
Resolution of the Calling
218.21 Thou shall arise the morning after and publicly resound The Hour for which is the Resolution of the Calling.
Vessels Are to be Hit!
218.22 Vessels are to be hit! The Presidential Congress of those who convey the Concord of Freedom are as follows.
218.23 The Bush Administration7 , The Fleet of the Concord with issues of Armament about to ignite-
218.23 The Vessel USS Constitution (The Vessel Constellation?)

218.24 In addition, the entire Fleet of the Jefferson are at great risk.9
The Luke & Uss Roosevelt at Risk​
218.25. The Luke and The USS Roosevelt are both entwined by division of opposing forces that are headed toward demise!
END
My Website is Trafford.com/06-1777
Notes: Indexed

Note: :)
 
To be fair to Thrustinsprit, I spent some time first going back and trying to read the original entry, along with some of the responses given.

After reading these things, I would say to Thrust (for short) that he may be suffering a mild form of religious hysteria. Look, Thrust...writing like that is artistic on some plane, but trying to make it sound like Scripture is a difficult task. First, you have to make it sound like Scripture, then you have to make a story out of it. All I saw was a lot of rambling and opinion-making, and pseudo-predictions. Truth is, I had trouble making sense out of it.

Thrust says this:

'But, what do Americans Do? We send Billions of Aid to every worthless spot on the globe to help the "People". Because we are a nation of "We the People" and we naturally extend it to others upon others upon upon more worthless people that have no hope in creation but by "Americans".'

Thrust...thrust...what are we to do with you? You sound like those people who used to say 'welfare is breaking the country'. This stuff is simply not true. Do you know the term 'entitlements'? This is a part of the U.S. budget, and accounts for nearly fifty percent of expenditures each year. These are Social Security, government retirement benefits including military pensions, Medicare and Medicaid, and payments on the national debt. In fact, the U.S. per-capita foreign aid contribution is lower than most industrialized countries.

Take another look at your statement above. It is arrogance. America has faults aplenty, but calling other people in other places 'worthless' is definitely not Christian. It presents a double standard. "I believe in God...as long as he lives in New Jersey..."

On the subject of your book, I suggest you give up the idea of writing the whole thing in this convoluted scripture-form and instead create a plot-based and character-driven story. If you want to use these scripture-creations, you would be better served to place one of them as the beginning of each chapter...sort of like a header to the chapter. Trying to do the whole book this way, well, IMHO just won't work.

Good luck.
 
LOL. Thrust here doesn't believe his work is fiction...he's suffering from advanced schizophrenia and thinks he's actually God's divine messenger. It's kind of sad, actually. I once had an aunt just like him. Except she thought I was Esther and my father was David and my cousins were Mary, Joseph, and Moses..anyway. She was a really nice lady, as long as she took her meds.
 
On the subject of your book, I suggest you give up the idea of writing the whole thing in this convoluted scripture-form and instead create a plot-based and character-driven story. If you want to use these scripture-creations, you would be better served to place one of them as the beginning of each chapter...sort of like a header to the chapter. Trying to do the whole book this way, well, IMHO just won't work.

Good luck.

I hope I got the quote thing right. RobertM, he's already written it. That's why the link to his home page; he's trying to sell the book. It's WRITTEN down and atheists like me are going to burn in. . . Oh, no, that's right, I'm going to be killed by a Tasumi.
 
Someone go and pick up the novel GhostWritten by David Mitchell. The asshole protagonist you're introduced to in the opening chapters is a lot like the asshole we've come to know and love of this forum. And I don't mean me, Manuscript, or some other idiot (That's right JohnB...you bastard). Thrust, shut the **** up, you're wrong, you were always wrong, and it's people like you that hurt those who have a chance to do something with themselves. But hey, I'll use your words. You know, the ignorant, foolish, conformists, yada, yada, yada. Those people, those people are normal, and you're a self-righteous (cursiest curse word ever here). Go masturbate to some child pornography...fucking bitch. (rant over)
 
The asshole protagonist you're introduced to in the opening chapters is a lot like the asshole we've come to know and love of this forum. And I don't mean me, Manuscript, or some other idiot (That's right JohnB...you bastard). Thrust, shut the **** up, you're wrong, you were always wrong, and it's people like you that hurt those who have a chance to do something with themselves. But hey, I'll use your words. You know, the ignorant, foolish, conformists, yada, yada, yada. Those people, those people are normal, and you're a self-righteous (cursiest curse word ever here). Go masturbate to some child pornography...fucking bitch. (rant over)


Whoaa, I'm overwhelmed by your debating skills and the eloquence of your language. You have definitely succeeded in pointing out the idiot on this forum for all to see.

JohnB
 
Can something topple upon its axis? Surely if you topple, you topple off your axis. Innit?

(Sorry, I may be a while catching up here... slow reader).
 
Whoaa, I'm overwhelmed by your debating skills and the eloquence of your language. You have definitely succeeded in pointing out the idiot on this forum for all to see.

JohnB


Rants and debates are two entirely different things. However, as an old man, you should be mature enough to know not to try and talk down to me with a condescending tone--one that was evident in your whole post. But, I'm a kid, so I don't care about debating and the such. I'll just poke fun at your medicore writing; go write a best seller and get back to me.

With love,
Me.
 
Funny thing about my "Medicore" writing. Editors pay for it. Go write something with correct spelling and get back to me.
 
Typos are great things, especially when they're what you have to pick at. But come on, Johnny-Boy; I'm an arrogant, egotistical, 16-year-old kid, as a natural rule of thumb I'm supposed to be an asshole, both a crude and ignorant one. And I'm not talking about editors, silly, I'm talking about people who actually read the "Friends in Dark Places," garbage and enjoyed it--but that's a whole other topic. Again, though, back to the age topic. You're an old guy, reasonably mature, reasonably sensible, yet you're choosing to pick on lil'l'me? I was ranting towards the OP, but you just waltz on in here and flex your aged ego? Come on, John, be the bigger man. Just walk away.
 
You're absolutely right. I'm taking the high road. You go on back to the playground where others are impressed by those grownup-sounding obscenities you spout. Oh, did that sound condescending? I'm so sorry.
 
Wow

If you truly are an "old man" you are sorta better off a hermit with no internet access. And hateful words towards teenagers? Come on you have to be far more mature than that. I myself am only 15, but that is disrespectful on both accounts Mr. WritenJohnB and you as well SevenWritez it is thoughtless, cruel, meaningless behavior and quite frankly a waste of time for me to read because a new post was made. PM argue if anything that way I don't have to check this page, and nobody feels that they should get involved, such as me, as a median between to annoying people that have such freakishly large ego's that if they don't get what they want they have to yell at each other in belittling terms that are so overused on a day-to-day basis that everyone is tired of hearing them. So in retrospect stop freaking out on each other and let it go, both of you.
 
Nick, I like you, so let me explain myself, in quick, simple terms. From ages blah through 13, I was a quiet, respectable, help-giving (Golly, I can't think of a word) young lad who went out of his way to do what he felt was right. Now, I'm not saying morals are wrong, and I'm not saying being respectable and considerate of others is "lame," but around age 14 I decided I wanted to say...phuck it, and just have fun. Being arrogant is rude, yes, but I'm not truly hurting anyone, only annoying them. If John is seriously offended by things I say, I'll back off. Since he's still kicking back, it's obvious he doesn't care, and thus, neither do I.

Realize that the internet isn't a haven to begin with, that naturally where a mix of personalities meet, people can and most likely will clash. I think John's an idiot, John thinks I'm an idiot, etc. etc. Does that mean we're going to go our seperate ways and ignore each other? This is the internet--that rarely happens.

And before someone pops in with the "you're hiding behind a computer screen," comment, let me first just say that I see you sort of people all the time. If me and my friends are cracked up on caffeine and running around madly (yes, we do, no, we're not bad people, but yes, if you see us in this light you hate us immidiately), you're the guy who looks at us, shakes their head, mutters somethign to themself, then prompetly walks away. Nothing wrong with that, not at all. But then to say others are hiding behind a screen when you yourself are doing the same exact thing? Come on.

Buuuuut, I rambled off in another direction there, so back to Nick. Yes, my ego is huge, no, I don't plan to pop the balloon containing it just yet, and no, I won't go out of my way to argue with you. Just realize, again, this is the internet, that arguments--be them calm debates or all out finger pointers--will happen, and to try and jump in with somethign that brings us both to see the light really won't make any impact, positive or negative.

I just wanted to throw that in there. Now, back to the finger pointing.

To Nick: "**** you"

To John: "Go write a book."
 
as i said

I do see your point but "**** you" wasn't quite necessary. And yes I am a lot like you I've given up on society as a whole, I get extremely caffienated sometimes and am generally an ass but just having a PM fight is much better because if a new post pops up I am almost forced to read it and albeit interesting and relatively funny this one isn't quite worth the time and I congratulate your patience, which most teens nowadays no longer have, and your ability to prolong a relatively meaningless fight is rather amazing and also another uncommon skill, but like most things is simply a waste of time and could be put to better use coming up with some sort of computer virus to email your internet enemies. But although I am "hiding behind a computer screen" doesn't mean you rant at me for having attempted to end a pointless fight between an old man and a teen which, just by the audacity of the damn thing, you have already won and should get a medal for besting an old man who is allegedly more mature than you and apparently has no real purpose of being in existence except to do the old-manly thing of yelling at children-young adults for being disrespectful towards nearly dead people. So in retrospect I wasn't attacking you but I was trying to end a random posting session between some guy and you.
 
Well, I haven't exactly given up on society, don't think that. I still help people when I see them falling deeper into a pit, and I will still go out of my way to help people understand things, be it either school-related or something dealing with more personal issues (I've had to serve as a medium on more than one account and though they were always awkward moments for me they led to great story ideas--and some kick ass dialogue). No, I love people, I love the Good, the Bad, and the Ugly sides of society--and that movie is pretty kickass, too.

I just decided somewhere in the summer after eight grade--or freshmen year, not entirely sure--that I was going to stop hiding my darker, cockier, much more outspoken alter ego (sounds corny, but it's the only way I can describe it), in writings and let it run loose in public. As for the internet? I cuss people out when talking, and will do the same when "debating," on a forum. Now, nothing against anyone here, as I like the odd miss-match of people. Manuscript, John, Stewart, Val, Vesp, other people who I'm thinking of by their avatar and not knowing their names...yeah, it's a nice little bunch, and I'd rather more people lash out against each other here, just so I could sit back and watch (oh sweet mother of Jesus I'm a sadist!).

Yeah, society is great, never give up on it. Love the people around you, even if they think you hate them. As for John, if you come back to read this, seriously, good luck on your next book, if you're writing one. I'm rude with words, enough people here have seen that, but I don't mean half the things I say. I haven't read your book so I won't judge it, but that doesn't mean I still won't poke a jab at you just for the hell of it.

I guess this is a pre-"sorry," to anyone I end up...debating with.
Ok, I'm done. Toodles.
 
well something on topic

May the Lord Bless you, and you have have perfect health until you turn away from Him (God).

Umm... I have become sort of without religion and no I'm not atheist I simply have no religion. But since I stopped being a christian not once have I become ill and its been 5 years. I'm only 15 and have not been sick for at least five years since I "turned away from god" and in truth I find it harder to be offended and my decisions are based more upon my own thought and personality rather than my religion and the sort, so I believe you to be full of crap, and that which has been repetatively stated: bring me a prophecy not history
 
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